I really liked the way you told us about how you felt at the river talks, I also really like the way you added detail to your work, One thing I saw that was wrong with your work is that you didnt use capital I's but other than that amazing work, Keep it up.
Hi Lovey,
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you told us about how you felt at the river talks, I also really like the way you added detail to your work, One thing I saw that was wrong with your work is that you didnt use capital I's but other than that amazing work,
Keep it up.